first rain

As with the previous haiku, this was written as part of a dedication when I gave a copy of my book to a friend. Years and years ago, I met and got to know him a little while we both still lived in Ukiah, California. He now lives in Colorado; I in Reno, Nevada. One never knows where life will lead. Wherever that may be, the scent and sight of autumn’s first rains in the hills around Ukiah will never be forgotten.

first rain

deep green leaves glisten
dust is rinsed from weaves of rust
fresh mud seals cracked earth

ray

I recently found occasion to sign a copy of an inkling hope to an author who has over the years influenced my style and approach to poetry. When I did, I wrote this small dedication. His nom de plume is blended amongst the words and imagery.

ray

red pine at dawn
light expands through cool sea mist
a sun beam sparkles through

pierce

This is a rewrite of a haiku I just stumbled upon from November of 2001.

pierce

This poem has been published in my book an inkling hope: select poems, available in Kindle and paperback formats. Out of consideration for those who have purchased a copy, I have removed it from this post and online viewing in general.

I didn’t at all understand the haiku back in 2001, a lifetime ago. I somewhat cringed as I opened the file to have a look at what might be inside, thinking, “Oh haiku. Right. Like I even knew what those were eleven years ago.”

But I surprised myself. I may not have known what they were back then, but it would seem that I at least had an inkling. It was immediately apparent that I had something almost worth blogging, but after a few edits, this became obvious.

Cherry Drifts

There are a handful of things that I always find myself looking forward to throughout the year. One is the budding of black oaks. I’ll go on walks and drives just to look at black oaks as their leaves bud and fan out, like little purple feathers at first, and before you know it a deep green canopy.

Another thing I look forward to are cherry blossoms. I was staying at my employer’s house in the hills west of south Reno when I wrote these. A month earlier I got to watch the cherry trees bloom in and around Ukiah, California. Then I got to see them bloom again in Reno, like clouds of light, as spring came to the higher elevations. Yet on the mountain where I was staying it still snowed some.

Such surroundings are bound to inspire the occasional proper haiku.

Cherry Drifts

This poem has been published in my book an inkling hope: select poems, available in Kindle and paperback formats. Out of consideration for those who have purchased a copy, I have removed it from this post and online viewing in general.

birch

A small set of haiku inspired by late autumn in Ukiah, specifically the turning of a few tall birch trees growing in the front yard.

birch

This poem has been published in my book an inkling hope: select poems, available in Kindle and paperback formats. Out of consideration for those who have purchased a copy, I have removed it from this post and online viewing in general.

iris mist

And the second of the two haiku posted today. During winter, dew that settled during the night here in Ukiah will sometimes evaporate at sunrise into heavy mists that carpet neighborhood lawns and garden plots. This phenomenon lasts for a very short time—an hour tops—so I count myself lucky when I get to see it.

iris mist

hints of pastel blue
sift through silent folds of gray
swaying in the void

electric willow

Two haiku today, posted separately. They were written on the fly to demonstrate the way a haiku should say nothing but show everything. Here’s the first of the two.

electric willow

long leaf branches flail
howling twisted shadows stark
against the door frame

Treatises are better suited to poetic forms that grant space for explication. Of course, there are the rare haiku maxims that lodge within mind and recycle there almost indefinitely. But still, even those are usually in image form, avoiding overt exposition. And those maxim haiku are probably not really haiku anyway, but successful aphorisms.

Is it showing that I have a fever? Day three. I’m getting a bit tired of the dizzy delirium.

wane

A wee haiku. I Love these things. This was inspired by the island mountains that rise from the desert floor in Nevada, Arizona, Utah, and New Mexico.

wane

sundial mountains
stretch their giant shapes across
the lessening days

what is haiku

Though I don’t write many haiku, I do think I understand them. Quite well in fact, along with the tanka. Haiku and tanka represent a universal crowning point within the realm of poetry. And I firmly believe that he who takes the time to master haiku and/or tanka—not just “write” them en masse, anyone can do that—masters much of poetry itself.

In February 2005 someone asked me to write up an explanation of the haiku for her so she could write one. It seemed somehow counterproductive—wrong even—to explain the haiku using expository prose, so I offered the following.

what is haiku

This poem has been published in my book an inkling hope: select poems, available in Kindle and paperback formats. Out of consideration for those who have purchased a copy, I have removed it from this post and online viewing in general.

rainsong

It’s been raining a lot lately. She tucks in the day with a giant gray comforter and lulls me to rest with persistent song. Since I work nights, this is welcome music.

rainsong

This poem has been published in my book an inkling hope: select poems, available in Kindle and paperback formats. Out of consideration for those who have purchased a copy, I have removed it from this post and online viewing in general.